Update DevOps Score doc and callout

The DevOps Score tab was redesigned in
https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab/-/issues/271244
and the "helpful links to articles and GitLab docs,
to help you improve your scores" that the docs mention
were removed.

This removes these mentions from the docs and the UI callout.

Changelog: changed

app/views/admin/dev_ops_report/_callout.html.haml

@@ -8,6 +8,6 @@
       %h4
         = _('Introducing Your DevOps Report')
       %p
-        = _('Your DevOps Report gives an overview of how you are using GitLab from a feature perspective. View how you compare with other organizations, discover features you are not using, and learn best practices through blog posts and white papers.')
+        = _('Your DevOps Report gives an overview of how you are using GitLab from a feature perspective. Use it to view how you compare with other organizations.')
     .svg-container.devops
       = custom_icon('dev_ops_report_overview')

doc/user/admin_area/analytics/dev_ops_report.md

@@ -20,21 +20,22 @@ To see DevOps Report:
 ## DevOps Score
 
 NOTE:
-Your GitLab instance's [Service Ping](../settings/usage_statistics.md#service-ping) must be activated in order to use this feature.
+To see the DevOps score, you must activate your GitLab instance's [Service Ping](../settings/usage_statistics.md#service-ping).
 
-The DevOps Score tab displays the usage of major GitLab features on your instance over
-the last 30 days, averaged over the number of billable users in that time period. It also
-provides a Lead score per feature, which is calculated based on GitLab analysis
-of top-performing instances based on [Service Ping data](../settings/usage_statistics.md#service-ping) that GitLab has
-collected. Your score is compared to the lead score of each feature and then expressed as a percentage at the bottom of said feature.
-Your overall **DevOps Score** is an average of your feature scores. You can use this score to compare your DevOps status to other organizations.
+You can use the DevOps score to compare your DevOps status to other organizations.
 
-The page also provides helpful links to articles and GitLab docs, to help you
-improve your scores.
+The DevOps Score tab displays the usage of major GitLab features on your instance over
+the last 30 days, averaged over the number of billable users in that time period.
+You can also see the Leader usage score, calculated from top-performing instances based on
+[Service Ping data](../settings/usage_statistics.md#service-ping) that GitLab has collected.
+Your score is compared to the lead score of each feature and then expressed
+as a percentage at the bottom of said feature. Your overall **DevOps Score** is an average of your
+feature scores.
 
 Service Ping data is aggregated on GitLab servers for analysis. Your usage
-information is **not sent** to any other GitLab instances. If you have just started using GitLab, it may take a few weeks for data to be
-collected before this feature is available.
+information is **not sent** to any other GitLab instances.
+If you have just started using GitLab, it might take a few weeks for data to be collected before this
+feature is available.
 
 ## DevOps Adoption **(ULTIMATE SELF)**
 
@@ -46,7 +47,7 @@ collected before this feature is available.
 > - The Overview tab [introduced](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab/-/issues/330401) in GitLab 14.1.
 > - DAST and SAST metrics [added](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab/-/issues/328033) in GitLab 14.1.
 
-DevOps Adoption shows you which groups within your organization are using the most essential features of GitLab:
+DevOps Adoption shows you which groups in your organization are using the most essential features of GitLab:
 
 - Dev
   - Approvals
@@ -62,8 +63,7 @@ DevOps Adoption shows you which groups within your organization are using the mo
   - Pipelines
   - Runners
 
-When managing groups in the UI, you can add your groups with the **Add group to table**
-button, in the top right hand section the page.
+To add your groups, in the top right-hand section the page, select **Add group to table**.
 
 DevOps Adoption allows you to:
 

locale/gitlab.pot

@@ -37935,7 +37935,7 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "Your CSV import for project"
 msgstr ""
 
-msgid "Your DevOps Report gives an overview of how you are using GitLab from a feature perspective. View how you compare with other organizations, discover features you are not using, and learn best practices through blog posts and white papers."
+msgid "Your DevOps Report gives an overview of how you are using GitLab from a feature perspective. Use it to view how you compare with other organizations."
 msgstr ""
 
 msgid "Your GPG keys (%{count})"